Today I had a tutorial with Richard regarding the first draft of my essay.
This was really positive and it was great to hear that Richard was pleased with my essay. He said that the triangulation was good which was a definite confidence boost as I was really worried about this and not sure how well I had applied what we learnt in the seminar. He did mention that if I added a few more sources this would help the triangulation and could increase the grade to a first.
He also mentioned working on my conclusion to reiterate some key points made in the essay and explained that this could also improve my grade.
As this is a high grade as it is he advised I focussed on my practical for now and then if I have time re-visit this. I really want to find the time to revisit the essay as I enjoyed writing it and I am really interested in the subject, so I want the essay to be the best it can be.